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Macro world

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My other macro works
Image size
3872x2592px 3.83 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D60
Shutter Speed
10/1600 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 9, 2010, 11:09:35 AM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact


I love these flowers, especially once they get into full bloom and how they blanket the ground, it's beautiful.

The colors you captured here are beautiful, I'm not usually very fond of dark photos, but in this one, it's very natural feeling, giving it a good appearance over all.

I do have a few suggestions and things I notice,
first: I'm not quite sure how I feel about the pine tree in the background, it seems sort of distracting and unbalanced. Maybe if you moved the framing to the right a little bit you could've captured more of the flowers.

I also think maybe if you had gotten closer to a specific flower or group of flowers, it'd show a bit more detail of them, with more in the background.

I am quite fond of the angle you used, the tallest one on the left gives a feel as though you're looking up in a sense, which is quite appealing to the photo. Also, I love the bokeh in the background. It gives of a sort of painterly feel when you look past the flowers. Nice job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

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TORi

***please do not pay attention to the stars, the critique is in what I wrote***